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Sunday, November 1, 2015

NaNoWriMo 2015 Opening Exerpt

“Just watch,” Clacks said, pointing at a man in whiteface, making balloon animals beside a fountain. 

A group of children stood before him, watching in awe as the man blew up a long, blue balloon. “Ok, who wants a snake?”

A look of disappointment swept over the kids, as the painted man smiled. “Just kidding, I thought we’d start with a doggy. Who would like a doggy?”

Sarin watched as a young boy of about five years old raised his hand.

“Ah, and what is your name, little one?” The white-faced man asked.

“Tommy,” said the lad.  

“Ah Tom, that’s a strong name, and is your mom or dad here?”

“Yeah,” Tommy pointed at an auburn tressed woman, also wearing green.

“Ma’am, is it alright if I make Tommy here a doggy?”

She smiled and shrugged before reaching into her purse. She pulled out a dollar and dropped it into the top hat with a red scarf tied about it that sat on the edge of the fountain.

“Thank you much, miss,” the man said as he began to twist the blue snake into something that quickly resembled a dog.

“Seriously, a balloon artist?” Sarin asked of Clacks.

“First, they call him Loon, and he’s not just any ‘balloon artist.’ He’s a gifted Twister.”

“Twister?” Sarin asked, shifting his oft-patched backpack, the strap more duct-tape than fabric, from his right shoulder to his left.

“Like I said, watch,” he  said as he pulled a pair of scissors out of one of the deep pockets in his too-thick overcoat. He crept up behind the park bench where the old man was sitting with his granddaughter, feeding the pigeons. Slowly he extended his arm and snipped the red ribbon that tethered the mylar happy birthday balloon to the blonde, pig-tailed girl. 

“Papa!” She exclaimed as the balloon began to float away.

Loon looked up and saw the birthday balloon ascending into the clouds and handed the half finished blue dog to Tommy. “My balloons are needed elsewhere, buddy. I’ll finish yours in a minute.” With that, he pulled a pink balloon from a pocket of the tweed jacket he wore and blew it up. His hands a blur of movement, a butterfly swiftly took shape. “Now here’s where the real magic happens.” He pulled a roll of clear tape from his other pocket and quickly made a loop, sticking it to the head of the butterfly. With a tug, he reached out and untied the red scarf from his top hat. Walking over to the now-sobbing girl, he winked at the old man. “Sweetheart, will you hold out your hand?” Loon asked, holding out the butterfly.

Sniffling, the girl did as she was asked, taking the offered rubber creature into the palm of her hand. 

Loon draped the red scarf over the butterfly and leaned in close, whispering something so softly, that not even the girl could hear it. Smiling, he blew on the scarf, which began to twitch. With a flourish, the man pulled the scarf from atop the balloon butterfly, which sprang to life, it’s wings beating feverishly as it drifted higher into the air.

The girl gasped, and then despite her sniffles, giggled. The inflated insect climbed higher and higher, chasing the birthday balloon, which had already drifted out of sight. 

“Now, Tommy, where was I,” Loon turned back to the boy, who stood, mouth agape, holding the half finished dog. Loon took the balloon and after a few more twists, he pulled a black marker from a pocket and drew eyes and a nose upon the canine’s head. “Here you go Tommy,” Loon handed the animal back to the young boy. “Who’s next.”

He had almost finished a balloon sword when one of the other boys in the group shouted.

“Look,” he pointed into the sky.

“Shit,” Sarin followed the gaze of the rest of the crowd, and could not keep the exclamation to himself.

“I told you to watch,” Clacks said as the butterfly floated back down toward Loon, towing the birthday balloon. “Come on,” he motioned to Sarin to follow as he approached the Twister.

The Twister handed the sword to a young, curly haired child as the butterfly landed on Loons shoulder, he reached up a once white, now grey glove, and pulled the girls balloon from the piece of tape. “Here you go sweetheart,” he pulled a new ribbon from his pocket and tied it first about the balloon and then about the girls wrist. “Hope that’s not too tight.”

The girl shook her head and thanked Loon in a meek voice, before giving him a hug. “Papa, look!” she said, more excitedly to the man on the bench beside her.

“I see,” the old man said with a smile and a nod. “Thank you,” he said, turning from his granddaughter to Loon. “Thank you,” he said again as he pulled out his wallet. “Here,” he offered the balloon artist a five dollar bill. “I don’t know how you did that, but it was definitely worth at least this."

With a Cheshire-Cat grin, Loon took the money and stuck it in his pocket. “Thank you sir,” he said with a bow. “Ok kiddies, I’ll be back, looks like Ol’ Loon has some friends he needs to talk to.” 

“That was some- Well, that was something alright,” Sarin said as Loon walked over, “Care to tell me how it was done?”

The man in the white make-up looked at Clacks, who nodded.

“You must be Sarin,” Loon said, extending his hand and ignoring the question.

Sarin smirked as he shook the offered hand. “I wouldn’t tell either I suppose.” 

Loon chuckled, “there’s not much to tell, besides, have you figured out how Clacks here does his trick?”

“Touché. Care if we walk for a minute, I’m not a fan of all the young ears.”

“We can’t go far, I did tell them I’d come back.”

“Fine, once around the pond, then?”

“That’ll work, but first,” he runs over and grabs his top hat, tying the scarf about it as he walks back to join Sarin and Clacks. He pulls a few bills from within the hat, looks them over and shoves them into his pocket before donning the hat.

The three set out, Clacks falling in a step behind the other two as they began the short jaunt. 

“So, Clacks tells me you’re looking for a few additions for your crew.”

“You could say that.”

“Crew for what? I do pretty well for myself up here,” he pulls a worn leather wallet from beneath his jacket and then grabs all of the bills from his pocket. Counting them, he smooths each out against his chest before placing them in the wallet. “This alone,” he says as he stuffs the fiver into the billfold, “will cover all of my balloons for at least two weeks. And I’m not interested in any funny business.”

“Nope, no funny business, at least none planned-”

Clacks smacked Sarin on his shoulder.

“Hey, I’m just being honest.”

“Ok, I hear that, but you still haven’t told me what you need a crew for.”

Clacks stepped forward, shoving his way between the two men. “Sarin here has a boat on the Underground Sea, mainly running supplies between the Black Bazaar and The Outer Gate, sometimes more, sometimes less, if you catch my drift.”

Sarin started to groan at the apparent pun, to which Clacks apologized.

“Ah, and how am I supposed to help?” Loon said, look from one man to the other.

Sarin stepped in front of Clacks and slowed just long enough to fall back into step with Loon. “I’d be lying if I said I knew, but I was given your name and I’ll be damned if you didn’t just impress me back there.”

“I’ll need to think about it. What’s in it for me?” 

“I’d give you some bullshit about seeing the world, but- You’ve been down to the Black Bazaar?”

“A couple of times, I make a lot more up here, but I occasionally have need of some of the services they offer, if you know what I mean.”

“I do,” Sarin said as he lifted his loose t-shirt, showing a pair of six inch scars on his left side. “Martha can work miracles,” he added with a smile and a wink.

Loon winced, “what are you asking me to get into?”

Sarin’s smile widened, “Ha! This?” He laughed as he let his shirt drop, “I got asked to grab one of the sewer gators about three months ago. You should see what I did to it!” He pulled a thin silver necklace from within his shirt, a pair of pointy teeth dangling from it. “Your question, what’s in it for you, well,” he said with a chuckle, “if you run into any sewer crocs, I’ve got them.”

“Frankly, there’s not much chance of that up here.”

“Noted. The Underground Sea is not much for looks, but you’ll get an equal share of anything we bring in as a crew. Hell, here,” Sarin reached into his pocket and pulled an iridescent sphere from his pocket. “Pearl, probably worth enough to keep you in balloons for a year, you can keep it if you come along or not.”

Loon took the sphere, and closing one eye, held it up to the sun. “Thing’s got to be an inch across.”

“Yep,” Sarin said, pulling a drawstring pouch from his belt and opening it. “There’s more where that one came from,” he said, showing a pouch full of what looked like marbles to the painted man. 

“Color me impressed,” Loon said, slipping the pearl into a pocket inside of his jacket. “Clacks, what’s your take on this?”

“I’m the one that arranged this meeting, didn’t I?”

“Guess so. I’d still like to think about it. Oh, and next time you want a demonstration, you can find a better way to get my attention. The ribbon was cut” Loon chided as they arrived again at the fountain. With a slight frown, he added, “What do the tiles say about this?”

Clacks laughed, “see for yourself,” he said, pulling his own drawstring pouch from his belt.  He held it out, open, before the Twister.

Loon reached into the bag, his hand closing about a few tiles. He opened his had as he withdrew it and shook his head. “How do you do it?” The white-faced man asked Clacks as he looked at the word the tiles formed in his open palm. ‘JOIN’

Sarin smiled, “So?”

“I said I wanted to think about it, and I still do. I’ll be here tomorrow with your answer. I have one more question though.”

“Yeah?” Sarin said as Loon returned the tiles to Clacks’ pouch.

“Who told you about me?”

Sarin motioned for Clacks to hold the pouch out, and reached his own hand within, pulling out seven tiles. “Ask him,” he said, opening his hand and revealing the word 'BALLOON.'

Monday, December 1, 2014

It's December, You can come out of your NaNoCocoon now

Did you finish?
Yes, no? Did you at least try? Then congratulations are in order
Chuck Wendig on terribleminds.com (if you have never seen his site, go, read, this post will stil be here when you get done) offered this this morning
"What matters is you. What matters is the work.
And right now, you've got something.
I don't know if it's finished or not. Did you win or lose?
Forget winning and losing."
And really, sure I won, and I got a banner and a printable certificate, and I will get a shirt for Christmas I am sure (the shirts are really cool this year!) but those are merely things.
What I really got is much better than that. Better than fresh out of the oven peanut butter (or if you don't like, or heaven forbid are allergic, chocolate chip, or oatmeal, or sugar, or insert your favorite type of warm cookie here) cookies. Better than most of my Christmas presents'll be. Better than se- nope, but you get the picture. It's pretty damned good.
I got a story, it may not be good yet (I think it is but I have yet to hear opinions other than my own family's, they're a bit biased). I have a piece of rough stone, that when put into the river called editing, can come out as a polished piece, something I might be proud to put on my mantle, or even sell to someone else to put on their mantle.
And it's mine. All mine, well, except for the fact that I am sharing it with the entire f'n internet over on Wattpad. But it is mine, and I am proud of it, and I am going to ride that feeling for a little while.
This is not my time to parrot Chuck (did you click that link above, here it is again if you didn't, terribleminds.com) but he made some good points and offered some good suggestions on what to do now that the whole shindig is over, so go read it.
This is my opportunity to reflect, and I am sure there will be more thoughts as time wages on, but here they go in no particular order:
1) I've still got it. No, i'm not a good writer (maybe I am, but that is not for me to say), what I still have is the desire to be a writer, to be a better writer. The desire to write!
2) Not every story is worth 50k words. Sometimes, you are writing fluff or filler, and you know you are because of that word count. Don't stop! Sometimes a gem will drop into your lap, if you are writing, continue to write, there will a pass or two (or three) where you will trim the fat and change things around, but leave them there to get trimmed, to be changed.
3) Holy shit, writing is hard. Writing is work and it should be treated as such, especially if you want to be a professional about it. But that doesn't mean you shouldn't do it. 
4) Holy shit, writing is fun. And when it stops being fun is when you take a step back and wonder, is it the subject that is not fun, the story, or the task?  If it is the subject, shelf it and pick a different idea. If it is the story, try telling it from a different angle. If it is the task, and you still think you really want to write, examine how you write, where you write. Or maybe, writing is not for you. Not everyone is meant to be driving down the highway behind the wheel of a twenty ton cement mixer either.
5) I've got plenty more ideas in my head. And some of them deserve to come out.
6) I need space to write. I spent quite a bit of time at home this November and writing with a toddler, a wife (who means well mind you, but she has needs, and things to do too) and an infant, as well as two teenagers who want to be driven here or taken there, or would like to know if I'd like to meet their new boyfriend, or yada yada yada, blah blah blah. What this did not give me was the solitude to focus on writing or develop meaningful streaks and momentum. Did the story suffer from it? I don't know, it did offer quite a bit of time for some reflection.
7) I work better with goals and deadlines. Imagine that, but as I look at the chart of my progress, I was behind (see previous bullet for one of the reasons), but I always knew where I was supposed to be, and that, at least in my head made it easier to catch up.
Where do we go from here? I'm not going to link that site again (maybe I should... nah) but my first goal is to relax a bit, maybe take a shower after the brutality that last month was. And then I have a story by the name of Underground Princes to finish while some other people give me some solid feedback on Into the Darkness. Then I will be trimming the fat, combing out it's hair, dressing it up, and overall throwing it into that edit river i mentioned above, so it can get that sheen that I feel this one deserves.

(this post has also been shared over at the Thursdaytales Page in its entirety).

Monday, January 20, 2014

Hollow World Book 3 Chapter 27


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Peter pedaled the bike up the hill, breathing heavily, his legs fatigued.  Even with most of them still on foot, they seemed to be moving a lot faster with Kyle on wheels.  The city of Tucumcari was not far ahead, the few tall buildings sticking up high enough for them to see over the intervening hills.  He dismounted on the crest.  “Ok, it’s someone else’s turn.”  He said, holding the bike out for someone to take.

Julie took it from him as Zach rolled by on the other one, coasting down the hill and partway up the next before he had to pedal anymore. 

“You gave up too early,” he called back over his shoulder.

Peter dismissed the taunting and fell into line, taking the cart that Julie had been pushing, and walking beside Amy.  “Hey.”

“Hey yourself,” she said.  They had not spoken much since the farmhouse, but they had not spent much time together either.

“So…”

“So,”  They did not say another word until hey had crested the next hill, Zach and Julie no where to be seen.

“Zach?” Peter called out, scanning a nearby grocery store parking lot and finally seeing them riding through it, toward an SUV with a bike rack on top.  A single bike, missing it’s front tire, sat atop it still.  “There,” he said, pointing the SUV out to his companions.  

They joined Zach and Julie a few minutes later, after the bike had already been pulled down.  “What do we have that will break that window?  Zach asked, pointing at the back window of the vehicle.

“Why?”  Brian asked.

“The tire is inside.”  Zach pointed past the tinted window, where Brian, with his face pressed against the glass nodded.

Peter handed Zach a gun.  “That’s the easiest I think.”

“What?  No hammers or anything?  Shit, this will attract everything for miles.  What about a rock?”

They searched about the parking lot and each of them came back with the largest rock they had found.  Brian had one the size of his fist which Zach took.

“Okay, everyone behind me,”  he said and once everyone was, he did his best wind up and pitched the rock at the back window of the SUV, hitting the car next to it.

“Let me try,” Peter said, laughing.  He retrieved the rock and hit the glass, although it did not shatter.  He threw the same rock again, missing completely.

“Okay Nolan Ryan, it’s my turn,” Brian said.

“Nolan Ryan?  You’re not old enough to see him play.” Zach said.

“Yes I am, my dad was a huge Rangers fan.  Him and I saw every game during his last few seasons.” 

“You must’ve been like five or something.”

“Eight,”  Brian wound up and threw the rock, shattering the back window.  “It didn’t hurt that I pitched back in high school, taking the team to state two years in a row.”

Zach grabbed the wheel from within the vehicle and attached it to the bike.  “They have a pump too.” He said a few minutes later, reaching past the broken glass again.  “Damn,” he said as he pulled his arm back through, trailing blood.

Amy grabbed his arm.  “Yea.  Damn is right.  You need stitches.”  They wasted nearly an hour and a whole gallon of water sterilizing everything and seeing him up.  “You got lucky,” she chastised, “Could have nicked a vein.”

Zach looked at the stitches on the underside of his forearm and said “Thanks,” followed by a humble “Sorry.”

Sarah cleaned up the medical kit while Amy went into the grocery story, looking for something to clean herself up with.

Peter went with her, gun in hand, but it was not needed.  “How bad is it?”  He asked her, standing close as she found a closed bottle of water and used it to clean her hands with.

“Like I told him, he got lucky.”

“Ok, I am going to go check out the rest of the store.  Yell if you need me.”  He left her, gun at her hip, drying her hand on her shirt.  He found a jar of peanut butter that he rolled towards the front of the store.  The next aisle, labeled baking goods, was a veritable cornucopia of things, from a full box of Bisquick, to a jar of freeze dried red onions, which he also rolled towards the front of the building.  It was two aisles later, zip lock bags and paper towels, that he heard Amy scream. 

He found her a minute later, three rows from where he had left her, heading in the opposite direction.  She clutched her own gun tight, pointing it down the aisle labelled cough and cold.  Zach was beside them a few moments later, despite his wounds.

“What did you see?”  He asked her.

“I, I don’t know.  I thought it was a person, but the more I think about it.”

It was a person all right, a man in fact, that ran from out of the swinging back doors in the deli area toward the front of the store.  Zach, Peter, nor Amy managed to get off a shot as the man nearly bowled all three of them over.  A shot from outside had all three of them running toward the stores entrance.

They got to the glass doors and saw the man who had tried to run through them, his blue apron still hanging about his neck and waist, standing with his hands in the air, a gun, held in Kyle’s hands, pointed at him.

“Don’t move,”  Peter said, adding his gun to the firearms pointed at the man.

“Don’t shoot please!”  The man whimpered.  

“Put your hands down,” Zach said, adding “Slowly,” for good measure.

The man did so, turning around.   "I was just looking for food,” he said.

Peter approached the man, who let him search him.  “He’s clean,” Peter said, once he was done patting the man down.

“Why would you come out here without a weapon?”  Zach asked, still pointing his gone toward the man.

“Look, my wife and I are on our way toward Boulder City, but we only had the one gun, and I left it with her.”  Had it played out any more perfectly, Julie would have thought after some kind of conspiratorial connection, but it was before anyone else said anything that they heard a distant shot fire.

The man took off across the parking lot, turning down a side street and was gone in search of his wife when the rest of Peter’s companions suggested moving onward, toward Boulder City.

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Thursday, January 9, 2014

Hollow World Book 3 Chapter 26


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Graham sat across from Erebus, as he had come to do every night, and asked him about the souls.

“They’re not here!”

“Unfortunately, I can’t afford to believe you.  And I, and therefore you, are running out of time.”

“So, what are you going to do about it?  You can’t kill me-“

“I could kill you.  But then I’d have to deal with your son.” 

“Can you not handle my son?”  Erebus asked, smirking.

Graham rose and backhanded the man.  “I don’t have time for dealing with him.  Now, I will ask you one more time.  Where.  Are.  Your.  Souls?”

“I’ve told you, I never brought them up here.”

“Then enjoy rotting in here, I can’t wait around any longer.  I have someplace to be.”  Graham exited the cell, slamming the door behind him.  

He sent out a call to his troops to be organized and ready in the morning, each of the Others hearing the order in their minds.  The next morning, the army gathered around him.  “Millennia  ago, all of you worshipped me.  Many of you said you would die for me and many of you did.  It was through my nephew that I was able to bring you back with me and now, we, with the help of my brethren and their dedicated souls, will resume our rightful place atop this world.  This morning we begin our march toward that final conflict.  This morning, as many of you marched for me in your previous lives, you will march for me again.  This morning, many of us march toward our deaths in this glorious conflict.  I assure you that if you do fall, when we win, you will be reborn.  And not as just a soul possessing an unfamiliar body.  I have talked of war before.  I have spoken of the war I am bringing.  Today we give them war.  Today we bring the war to them!”

He could feel the wall of sound as it rose around him, the Others chanting and cheering.  It took him nearly an hour to get them organized back into their companies.  While they were lining up in formation, he made a last trip to the room where his sisters representative and the one silent, unmoving Other resided.  He opened the door to find the both of the Others inside speaking, rather cordially, to each other.

“Ah, sister and…” Graham said, trying to figure out which of the other first born Gods he was conversing with.  

“Is it that hard to tell me from the others dear Tartarus?  You should have known I would show up at some point in time.”  Despite the masculine appearance of the Other, the voice was definitely female. 

“Ananke, how nice of you to join us finally,”  Graham said, eyeing the man that was Nyx for some reaction.

“Oh, dear brother, are you surprised that she would show up now?”  Nyx asked.

“Where do you stand Ananke?”

“Stand?  Where I always do.”

“In this war, make your allegiance.  You are either with us or against us.”

“Tartarus, calm down.  I am always on the side of the winners.  Always,”  Ananke said, smiling.  

“Somehow, that is not as reassuring as I feel you want it to be.”  Graham said. 

Ananke laughed.  “Gather from it what you will.”

Graham looked at Other-Nyx again, “And you, your army?”

“Is on it’s way.”

“Have them meet me on the road to Nevada.  I can wait no longer here.”

“And what of my soldiers?” Ananke asked, a hurt look upon his/her face.

“Are you pledging them to me?”

“I told you, I will be on the side of the winners.”

“We are headed to Boulder City.  Hope to see you there.  On my side.”  Graham left the room, tiring of Ananke’s games.  He had an army to mobilize.  He found his driver outside of the building and walked with him to where his chariot waited.  He patted each horse as he walked passed it, although each of the beasts stomped uneasily.  He popped the convertible top on the Mustang, hiding it within it’s compartment and sat upon the headrest of the back seat, his head rising above the windows.

“Ok let’s go,”  He told his driver, sending out the missive to his soldiers who began their march northward. 

He kept a more leisurely pace than he had on the way into White Sands, only making ten miles the first day.  They were camped in the middle of a plain, the cold wind stirring their tent flaps.

One of his Others made their way into his tent unbidden. “Dearest Tartarus,” Came Ananke’s voice.  

“I knew I would see you again soon, I just did not expect it to be this soon,” Graham said, noticing some motion at the edge of the firelight.

“I do not trust your sister Nyx.” She said.

“I’m sure she would say the same about you,” Graham said, glancing at the silhouette of a woman that he had noticed earlier.  

“This is not my fight, this is yours and hers.  Even though my name may not be remembered, I am still revered these days.  They just have a new name for me.  Many invoke Murphy’s Law without realizing that it is just a new face for an old god.  Ananke, the goddess of the inevitable.  I have changed with the times, adapted.  I am always on the side of the winners.  You should stop this foolishness, do you really think your nephew will allow you to win.”

“If I do so honestly, yes.”  Graham that was Tartarus said.

“And do you plan to?”

“Plan to win?  Yes I do.”

“That’s not what I meant, and you know it.”

“Maybe so, maybe so.  If you will excuse me though, I have an army to get back to.”  He said, looking out at the campfires burning around him.

Once she was gone and the Other had left him, the silhouette approached him.

“I head what she said,”  Nyx said, “and she is right.”

Graham looked at his sister.


“This is our war,” she smiled and winked.

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Sunday, November 10, 2013

Excerpt 2 from NaNoWriMo 2013

We ride silently, the clip-clop of the horses hooves and the creak and groan of the cart the only sounds.  The sun shown high above us as I dozed beside the farmer, Harold.   The squash in the bed of the cart was hard and lumpy, making it an uncomfortable bed, although believe me, I tried.  

“Uh, Tomas?”  He asked as I stirred, using the name I had given him.  Baker had been right, I had no idea who my enemies were, and without his, or Antoine’s help, I was not going to take too many chances.  

“Yes sir?”

“You never told me what you were doing out this far.”

“Yeah I did,” I wished I could at least reach my sword, but Harold had insisted I put it out of reach in the very back of the cart, “I fell into the river.”

“Yeah, I remember that,” he pauses long enough to move the piece of wheat from one corner of his mouth to the other, “but how did you end up in the river?”

“Oh,” I hesitated, maybe a bit too long by the look on Harold’s face, “My father and I were goofing off-“

“Your father?  Is he Baker or Antoine?”

My gaze shot back to my weapons, but Harold clucked the horse to a stop.  “Go ahead, get them, but don’t get back on if you do.  I don’t care if you’re the Crown Prince or not.”

I looked at him wide-eyed.  

“You’re not fooling anyone, Sire.”

I sighed, “It’s James.”

“I know.”  Harold flicked the reigns, his stubborn mule ignoring the gesture.  A flick of the reigns again drew a defiant bray, but the creature began to move and the cart lurched its way onward again.  “Look, you must have your reasons for being out here, for lying, but you need to get your story straight before you are asked, not after.”

“I know, I just haven’t had the time.”

“Who are Baker and Antoine, I heard you calling their names long before I saw you at the crossing.”

“They’re friends of mine, we got swept downstream together, well, not exactly together,” I say, looking at my feet.  I’ve begun to shiver.

Harold stands and takes what I thought had been a cushion from his side of the cart and unfolds it, draping it around my shoulders.  “That’s good.”

“What do you mean?”

“The answer, it may not be a lie, but it is not the whole truth, and it sounded natural.”

“But they are my friends!” I snap at him.

“And they’re more than that, aren’t they?”

I could not deny that, even in the short time that I had known Baker, he had become much more than a friend already.  I nodded.  “I guess you’re right, but how did you know?”

“I may be a farmer, but I’m a salesman too, I’ve learned to read between the lines.  And you left plenty of words between them for me to read.”

“Oh, so what now?”

“Well, that’s up to you.  The way I see it, you’re welcome to stay with me until we reach town, and then you can continue on your own, or you can get off now.  Your choice, just let me know so I can slow down,”  He grinned, his teeth straight but yellow.

“I’m not sure we can go much slower,” I laughed and he laughs too.  

“Yeah, Duke there ain’t what he used to be,” he said, nodding toward the mule.  

“But I’ll ride,” I tell him, pulling the blanket tighter around me.

“You don’t look too good,” He tells me and I must admit, I am not feeling that hot either.

He is right.  We stop as a small stream runs parallel to the road for us both to stretch our legs and to get a drink.  I can’t help but notice the circles under my own eyes, the general disheveled look I had undertaken.  I look at my arms, my legs, my ribs.  Try to count the bruises, but many of them are big enough now that they blend together, one continuous reminder of my trip down the river.  I used my reflection to check my back, completely lifting the shirt from my back.

“You weren’t kidding about getting swept down stream,”  Harold had approached after hitching Duke back up to the wagon.

I quickly pull my shirt back on, squirming under his gaze.  I was gaunt, I could count my ribs in my reflection.  I shivered again and grabbed the blanket, losing my balance and stumbling.

“Whoa there,” Harold grabs me, managing to keep me from completely collapsing.  “Here we go,” he helps me back to the cart, nearly lifts me into the seat.  I lean over, eyes closed, and the groan of the wheels soon lulls me to a restless sleep.

I am vaguely aware of hands on me, but when I open my eyes, the world is white, or grey, or green even.  Once.

I am lying flat on my back, a high peaked roof above me when I finally come too.  I try to sit up, but only manage to cough, setting my throat on fire.

“Here,” a young woman hands me a glass and helps me bring it to my lips.  It is cold water and feels good against my aching throat.  She takes the cup from me and sets it out of view.  Everything is throbbing, and I wince when she calls for her Pa to come in.

The man that suddenly fills my view looks nothing like the girl.  Where she was dainty with hair the color of chestnuts, he is massive, possessing a beard and long hair, both braided, all the shades of an autumn maple tree.

“Good, yer awake!” He says, his voice booming, echoing in the high ceilinged chamber.  I wince with each syllable and it only makes him smile brighter.  “When Harold brought you in, we weren’t sure what to make of you.  I almost gave you to the priest to say last rights over, but the lass wouldn’t have any of it.”  He nodded in her direction and she blushes.

“Bah!” He waves his hand at her and then puts a hand the size of my face on my forehead, covering my eyes and almost all of my nose.  “Fever’s finally broke.  Looks like she was right after all.”

“Pa,” I see her small hand come into the small window I have on the world and playfully slap the old man on his arm, and  I can hear the smile in her voice.  

I try to turn my head to look at her and groan.  Moving hurts.  So does groaning.

Her hands appear again before me, guiding the water to my lips.  I sip, thankful for the liquid.  I try to say thanks, but it comes out as a cough.  I smile weakly instead.

“Go get the lad some soup, will ya deary?” The man asks and I can no longer feel the girl hovering by my side.  I try to raise my hand, fail feebly.

“How-“ I manage, and the man smiles.  

“Give it a day or two, Stasia will get you up and talking again before you know it.”

Stasia.  I hope I can remember that.  She comes back with a bowl of soup and forces feeds me small spoonfuls.  The vegetables are soft and the broth is good, if a little salty.  We finish the bowl and I manage to turn my head a little.  She really is the opposite of the man she calls ‘Pa.’ Her nose is small, slightly upturned at the tip, green eyes, thin lips that almost disappear when she smiles.  Freckles.

I dream of those freckles and they are there when I wake again.  I can hear the fire crackling somewhere to my left.  I lift that hand, manage to get it a foot off the bed and then let it drop, the muscles in my shoulder aching from the exertion.  

“Proud of yourself?”  Her voice is softer than I remember, more like suede than velvet, the underlying roughness still apparent in the way she prodded me in the ribs.  I wince and she laughs.  “Sorry.  You need to take it easy.  Harold told us where he found you, but I can’t wait to hear your story.”  She helped me to some more water and then another bowl of soup.  I managed to stay awake a little longer this time, but soon I was snoring again.  Or so I was told the next time I woke up.

I have no idea how long I had been asleep, it was dark, and neither Stasia or her Pa was within my limited range of sight, which was lit by the dying fire.  I took a deep breath, which hurt my sides, but the pain was manageable.  Three more and I gritted my teeth together as I sat up.  Doing so almost made me pass out, and I almost fell back when I heard a shocked “Oh!” from somewhere in the dark corner of the room.

Stasia appears from the shadows, a brown and white gown obscuring the parts of her I had yet to see.  “Well, nice of you to join us again, even if it is rather early.”

“Thanks,” I manage, surprised that the sound not only made it out, but that it did not hurt any more to talk, or at least did not hurt that much.  

She smiles and takes a seat on a small wooden stool beside my bed, sets her hand on mine, and it feels familiar.  She probably has been sitting there hand on mine, since I was brought in, how long ago?  I had no idea.  

I start to say something, but manage to croak out “water” instead and soon a mug is pressed against my lips.  The water is not as cold as It had been the first few times I remember it, but it was still wet, and that was what I needed.  “Thanks again,” I said, and I laugh.  “At least I know how to be polite.”  My voice is hoarse, does not sound like me at all.  

“At least. How are you feeling?”

“I think I’ll make it.”  It is lame, and my weak smile does not help.  “How long have I been here?”

“Six days.”

I had been prepared for a day, maybe two, but not six.  My mind was cloudy, but I pushed the wisps away, did the math.  My friends had been missing for nearly nine days.  I try to push my way out of bed and feel her hand upon my chest.

“You’re not going anywhere.  Lay back down.  Whatever it is has waited this long, it will wait another day or two while you regain your strength.”  I push against her hand, but do not get anywhere.  Her laughter reminds me of the tittering of the maidens of the court.  Not when they were supposed to laugh, at some politicians joke, or some hammy thing the jester had done, but of their laughter when they were caught talking amongst themselves, in the hals outside of the throne room, or in the kitchens.  Real laughter.  Happy laughter.

“Fine,” I try to relax, “Can you at least tell me where here is?”

“You’re at the temple outside of the town of Gabriel’s Crossing.”

“So you’re a Sister?”  I say, trying to make sense of everything.  She laughs again, and I realize I enjoy the sound.

“No, my pa is caretaker of the cemetery.” Her slight accent made the last syllable sound like ‘tree.’

“Is there any more of the soup?” I ask as I feel my stomach growl.

“A little, let me get you some.”

I manage to sit up even further, placing my back against the headboard of the mattress, while she is getting the food.

“You’re going to hurt yourself,” she tells me as she brings the bowl back.

“Maybe.”

This elicits a snort from her and she rolls her eyes.  “You’re going to hurt yourself,” she says again, gently hitting my shoulder.

“Ow!”

“See.”  She holds a spoonful of soup before my mouth and I cut my eyes at her, waiting for some kind of an apology, but it never comes.  “Fine, if you aren’t going to open your mouth, I’m going back to sleep.”  She sets the bowl on the table next to the cup of water and stands, back to me.

Slowly, I reach for the bowl and manage to get it into my lap without spilling  a drop.  Getting it to my mouth is a different story and soon I am wearing two spoonfuls of carrots and peas.

Stacia sighs from the corner, “Here,” she comes over and cleans me up with a spare strip of cloth and then feeds me the rest of the food, leaving the bowl sitting in my lap.

“Thanks,” I say again.  

“Yep polite.  Later we can work on being a little less pig headed.”  She takes the empty bowl and sets it somewhere out of the range of the fire light and then wishes me good night.  “You should get some more sleep,”  She says and helps me lie back down.


I try, but spend the early hours of the morning staring at the log beams that make up the ceiling.  I have just drifted off when Pa’s voice can be heard from somewhere, nearby, faraway.  It is loud, but so is he, so I can not really tell.

Saturday, November 9, 2013

Excerpt from NaNoWriMo 2013 story

A black mass fills the sky in the distance, and it appears to be getting closer.

“Run!” It is Antoine, and he is already in motion, hopping in the direction of the stream.  

I manage to grab my blade, strap it on quickly, but leave my pack as the first hints of the ungodly racket the flock is making reach my ears.

Baker smacks the horse on its backside, but it does not need encouragement, it whinnies in fear and races off in the opposite direction.  I look over my shoulder, and see Baker mere inches behind me.

“Don’t look back, just run!” He yells as his long legs carry him past me.

I can see the stream ahead of me, Antoine already swimming out to the middle.

“Come on!” Baker yells from the river bank, and then dives in himself.

I can feel the rush of air behind me as I wade out into the water.  The moment I think the water is deep enough, I fill my lungs with air and dive, scraping my nose on the riverbed.  I can feel claws on my back as I struggle to go deeper.  By the time I no longer feel the attacks, my lungs are on fire.  I am searching through the water for my companions but do not see either of them.  My vision begins to blur and I shoot for the surface.  I shoot up out of the water, grabbing another deep breath, and I am under again, letting the current take me, frog kicking to put as much distance between myself and the unkindness.  I surface twice more in this fashion, my head pounding, the river carrying me further and faster with each stroke.

I begin to bump into large rocks and I surface, but the current is too strong.  I bob in the water, bouncing back and forth between the rocks for what feels like five minutes before I find myself swirling in a small eddy.  I take advantage of the relative calm, searching the skies but seeing no signs of the birds, and then the river ahead and behind, but no sign of either of my companions can be seen either.  I spend the next minute treading water, trying to catch my breath as I whirl about while water rushes past on either side of me.  

I pick a bank and plunge back into the current, swimming hard for land.  It takes a minute, and I end up quite a bit further down stream, but finally I can feel rocks and sand beneath me.  I pull myself ashore and lay there panting.  I close my eyes, just for a moment I tell myself, but when I open them again, I am nearly dry and the sun is high in the sky.  Slowly, I rise, groaning.  I ache all over.  I fall back to my knees and roll onto my back, looking myself over, testing my hands, my knees, my wrists.  Nothing seems to be broken, but I have a few nasty scrapes, including one on my left cheek and my forehead, and I feel like I have been beaten up.  Twice.  Miraculously my blade is still in its scabbard at my hip.

With a grunt I rise to my knees.  I then manage to make it to my feet, and nearly fall again.  I pull the blade at, water dripping from it.  I upend the sheath, dumping river water onto the bank and look about me.  A few yards up stream I find what I am looking for, and slowly make my way to it.  I pull the sword out and hack a few times, finally felling the small tree.  I shave off the branches and test my weight against the staff.  It supports me just fine, but the exertion has taken a lot out of me.  I sit on a nearby rock, resting and aching.  Finally I am ready and I rise again, and, leaning heavily upon the staff, I make my way along the shore upstream.

I see no sign of my companions, but that does not stop me from shouting for them.  I hear a rustle in a nearby copse of trees but when I go to investigate, all I find is a startled deer who bounds off away from me.

I wander, calling out, for nearly an hour, scanning both shores for any sign of Antoine or Baker, until I realize that I recognize where I am.  I look again and am certain that I bathed here but a few hours before.  I begin to retrace my steps of earlier, back towards our campsite.  What is left of our campsite Is a wreck.  What remained of our campfire has been strewn everywhere, as have the contents of my pack.  I manage to find the leather bag, but when I pick it up, am dismayed to find a hole has been torn in its bottom.  Angered, I toss the pack into the nearby tall grass.  I find a few scraps of food, crumbs mainly, and then come across the iron pot I purchased the day before.  Or perhaps I better say the pieces of the iron pot.  It lay shattered upon a large rock and I can only imagine the height the birds must have flown to in order to do this kind of damage.  I pick up the smallest piece, a rather sharp looking triangle, and put it in my pocket, hoping I can salvage something from this.  

I go back and find my ruined pack, tearing off a long strip of leather from the straps and manage, with my staff and the piece of iron pot, to fashion a crude looking spear.  I continue to lean heavily on the staff as I head back toward the river, intent on going further down stream and looking for my companions.  I have not travelled far when I see a dark circle of shapes upon the ground.

I scream and begin to limp, hop, and run toward them.  The birds, over sized buzzards, scatter after I throw the spear into their midst.  I don’t manage to hit any of them, but that had not been my intention.  It is a body, but not Antoine’s or Baker’s.  A horse.  Our horse, lay dead, its bones already nearly picked clean.  I retrieve the spear and sit, saying a prayer for the beast.  “You didn’t deserve this,” I say as the first of the carrion birds lands again nearby.  I am sitting there as it hops closer and grabs a chunk of the dead nag.  “Get away!” I shout and wave the spear at it.  It gets the hint and flies away, only to land a few yards away, watching me.

I am torn.  I can either sit here and guard the fallen horse from nature, or I can find my companions.  As much as I hate leaving the creature to end up as buzzard food, I need to find my companions.  Finally they win out and I make my way again to the stream.

I am hungry and hurting, but I continue on, following the current and shouting for both of my friends.  I come across a place where it looks like something pulled itself ashore, only to realize it is where I had done just that, and I sit down again and rest.  Hunger is beginning to win out and I search around unable to find anything edible on the shore.

I look out into the water and decide it is moving too fast for me to try, so I continue down river, keeping an eye out for anything I can eat.

It is another hour, and my stomach is growling rather loudly, when the river finally calms down.  I wade out and attempt to spear myself a fish, but after what feels like a hundred stabs, I am only hungrier, and I do not feel any more confident in my ability to catch myself a meal.  It is perhaps a hundred stabs later that I finally get lucky, and pull a small trout from the water, still wriggling.

With my sword, I carefully scale and bone the fish, and then start a small fire.  While the fish cooks upon a crude spit, I hobble around the area, calling, and listening, without luck.

The fish hits the spot, although it is not enough, but it is a start.  I pour handful after handful of water over the fire, hoping the black smoke will signal my companions, but again, no luck.

Discouraged, I continue on, limping and leaning upon the staff.  Night begins to fall and I am no closer to finding my friends as I was when I pulled myself ashore.  I light another fire and am lucky enough to find a few bushes ripe with berries.  Gorged on fruit, I fall asleep to the crackling of the fire, my dreams filled with rushing water, claws, and feathers.

I wake in the morning feeling as tired as if I had gotten no sleep at all.  The fires is but embers,  I throw on some grass and a few twigs I find, using the spear, and get the fire going again, chasing the morning chill from my bones.  I do another inspection of my body, wincing as I uncover bruise after bruise, but glad that none of the cuts have attained the angry pink tinge of infection.

With one thing to be thankful for, I rise, and using river water, douse the flames.  Again, the acrid smoke does not attract any attention, good or bad.

The day ends up much the same as yesterday ended.  The good things being that it took me less time to catch a fish.  I caught two fish, and I did not find my horse left to the buzzards.

The third day I find sign that something came out of the river, but I am unable to find what it was.  I am beginning to lose hope when I spot a covered bridge ahead.  

I am faced with a horrible choice when I make it to the bridge.  I can continue to search the river bank for my companions, or I can follow the original plan and take the road.
I sit at my crossroads, munching on leftover cooked fish.  It definitely is not as good as it was fresh, but it does the trick.  

Finally, I ask myself what my companions would do, and put myself in each of their place.

Baker would definitely see me take the road and finish my quest.  It is Antoine that I have trouble with.  His loyalty to me since his whole ordeal started makes me think that I should go in search of him, show him the same.  But at the same time, all he ever spoke about was what would happen once I returned.  Once I was seated on the throne.

“Uh, young man?”

I shake my head.  I do not know how long I have been sitting there, but there is a man on a cart loaded with squash, staring at me from the road.  “Yes sir?”  I ask.

“Oh good, I’ve been sitting here for nearly five minutes, I was afraid I was going to have to come down there.”  He has a long piece of straw, the same color as his hair, hanging from his lips.  He has dark circles under his green eyes, his tanned skin showing that he is no stranger to the outdoors.

“Afraid?” I ask him, not sure I get what threat I pose.

“Yeah, you, that spear and the sword at your hip.  And those cuts.  Not sure what to make of you.”
I fell into the river, I tell him, and after a long silence while he chews on the straw, he offers me a ride.


Antoine once told me that as the king, I never should pass up the hospitality of my subjects, and at this moment, I agree with him.

Tuesday, November 5, 2013

Hollow World Book 3 Chapter 25


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Clink.  Clink.  Clink.

The Pennyman sat in the stone cabin in the woods, his bag of obols on the floor beside him.  No one was dead, no one was dying.  He reflected on the bridge he had allowed to be built, and the souls he had allowed to walk across that bridge.  He sought out each of his relatives, the thirteen who had taken the opportunity and come back with their souls across the bridge and the river Acheron.  Graham he knew about and only briefly spied on him as he prepared the camp at White Sands.  Erebus, his father was missing, or just did not want to be found.  His mother, Nyx, was as devious as ever, sitting within the shadows in Las Vegas, a small contingent of troops surrounding her, plotting.  Gaia and Thalassa were, true to form, only interested in the earth and sea, at least currently, and had not brought any of their souls with them, content to revel in their newfound freedom.  

He sought out Phanes and when he discovered that the man that was the god of procreation was walking around within Boulder City, he quickly retreated, taking his three steps back to the cabin.  It was then the he heard the barely perceptible call of the almost dead and he grabbed his bag, appearing in an open field beside a prone man in a black leather jacket, the grey Gargoyle emblem clearly visible upon it’s back.  The man had a pierced lung from a broken rib, and recent exertions had made the situation worse.  His breathing was haggard and shallow.  The Pennyman sat by waiting for the man to die.  

It was while he was waiting that he realized that they were not alone.  Acmon sat on the outskirts of the field, watching from the tree line.  The Pennyman motioned for him to approach, and instead of walking the distance, Acmon appeared beside the dying man.  

“He’s mine,”  The Pennyman said, as the man’s breathing got even shallower.

“Not yet,” Acmon said with a smile.  He leaned over and spoke to the unresponsive man.  It was not until he stood up again that the Pennyman saw the man nod, albeit slightly.  Acmon bent down again and kissed the man’s forehead.  “Be healed and arise Davey Boy, a soldier against your former master.”
Davey Boy did as instructed as a flash of light accompanied the kiss.

The tug that the man had previously had on the Pennyman vanished and the two left him, disappearing arm in arm as they walked off into the field.  He watched them go and worried after the two of them.  The worry was short lived though as he felt the pull of multiple dead as Graham found a nearby community to torch and torture.


Clink.  Clink.  Clink.

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Friday, October 25, 2013

Hollow World Book 3 Chapter 24


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It was not the most spacious place, but Sam appreciated the second floor two bedroom apartment he had been afforded since driving through the gates of Boulder City.  It was sparsely furnished, but it had a pair of beds and a few chairs for them to sit in.   They had even been given clean clothes once their debriefing had finished.  Tama had been given a first floor unit a few buildings over that was similar.  She had yet to meet anyone she knew, but they had not met many people yet.  

They had been kept isolated for three days, occasionally visited by a man named Darrel, who was in charge of security for the city, or once by a man named Samuel Clemens, who claimed to be mayor of Boulder City.  During that time they had been asked about what they had seen, where they had come from, where they had gotten the car.  Their supplies had been confiscated, added to the city’s larder to be distributed as needed.

Sam stepped out of the shower, checking the gage that had been installed inside the bathroom to make sure that he had left enough of their daily allotment for Evelyn to use.  She had taken to sleeping in quite easily, clutching a brown stuffed bear that someone had left on her bed for her.  He had just finished pulling on a pair of blue jeans and a t-shirt when a knock came at the door.  He checked through the peep hole and saw the face of a young girl from down the hall.  He opened the door, straightening his clothes.  “Can I help you?”

“Can Evelyn come out and play?”  The girl asked, and the phrase sounded so foreign to Sam that he laughed.

“What?”

“Evelyn lives here, right?”

“Yeah.”

“Can she come out and play?”

“I think she’s still asl-“

“I’ll be out in a minute!”  Came a shout from her room.

“Ok, I guess so, give here a moment.  Want to wait inside?”

“Uh,” The girl looked back down the hall, toward her own apartment Sam guessed, and said no.

“Ok.”  Sam said, closing the door, but leaving it slightly ajar.

Evelyn came bounding out, her own outfit similar to his, new jeans, or at least clean and un-ripped jeans, and a t-shirt.  She had also grabbed a light jacket.  She raced out the door and Sam had to call after her.

“Be back for lunch.”

“Ok!”

Sam watched her run down the hallway with the other girl, amazed at how different this was from the life he had grown accustomed to over the last few months.  

He finished get ready to go out and ten left, heading for the main square of the town, where he knew he would find Mayor Clemens, drinking coffee outside of a cafe.  He was there every morning to listen to his constituents he had said during their first meeting.  

After a brief walk through the windswept streets, Sam reached the park they had taken to calling the main square.  They were only using about half of the city, and had barricaded streets throughout the town in an effort at protection.  A small bakery and coffee house occupied the northeast corner and true to form, Sam found the mayor there, speaking with an older blonde, Juliette he thought her name was.

Mayor Clemens nodded and held up a finger, acknowledging Sam, who ordered a small coffee, handing in one of his leisure chips.  Everyone in the community was given a dozen of them a week, and there were job postings that allowed them to earn extra chips that could be spent on everything from coffee to extra water, or toys in case of some of the kids, and more child-like adults.  Basic necessities, to a point, were taken care of and provided for by the community.  He was sitting down sipping his coffee when a shadow fell over him.

“May I?”  Asked the mayor, indicating the empty seat across from him.  

“Go for it.”

“Ok, so Sam, what can I do for you?”

“When do I get my car back?”

“Not beating around the bush, are you?  I’ve been talking with Darrel about it, and he thinks we can make a compromise.”

“A compromise?  I gave you all of the other food and the weapons that I brought in, all I am asking for is my car.”

“And we’ve given you a place to stay, electricity, running water, and protection.”

“None of which I asked for!”

“What did you expect to happen when you came through those gates?”

Sam had to admit that he had no answer for this question and he sat quietly.

“So, back to our compromise.  You can have the car back.”  He pulled the keys from the inside breast pocket of his jacket and set them on the table.  Sam reached for the keys but Mayor Clemens held up a finger.  “There’s a catch.  You can’t keep it within the walls.  We think it’ll cause too much fear with the rest of the people.”

Somebody waved at the mayor and he waved back.  Sam picked up the keys.  “I can live with that, is that it?”

“Well, we would appreciate it if you took someone else and checked out some of the farther out towns for supplies soon.  We’d give you extra chips of course.”

“Who?”

“Well, Darrel suggested himself, I think he just wants a chance to drive it.”

“You mean he didn’t?”

“Oh no, it hasn’t left the garage you brought it to.  That fear thing and all.”

“Ok, I was planning on it anyways.  What about Evelyn?”

“Well, the woman you came in with, uh…”

“Tama?”  Sam offered.

“Yeah, she could watch her.  Or Evelyn should probably be going back to school soon-“

Sam choked on his coffee.  Red in the face from coughing, he finally managed to say “After all I’ve been through, I just find the idea of school a little far fetched.”

“How many weeks worth of food did you have?  How many bullets.  Could you tell the time by the sun?  What about music, I saw the CD’s in the car.”

“Ok, I see your point.”

“Plus what is she to do?  We need intelligent and trained people if we are going to succeed, not only here, but out there as well.  We need people more people like you that we need people like me.  Sure I can lead.  I can give a grand speech, but you are a doer.  It’s people like you that are going to keep us going.  People like you that will move us forward.”

“I hope so.  About that, who should I talk to about going out for supplies.”

The mayor smiled, “Darrel, of course.”

Monday, October 21, 2013

Hollow World Book 3 Chapter 23


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Peter had to admit, it was just like riding a bike, as he rode down the long driveway.  He had chosen to go first so that he could then spend the rest of the time helping Kyle and Brian.  After only five minutes, a trip down to the end and back, he had the hang of it again.  He made one more circuit jut to be sure, Rocky chasing him and barking the whole time.  He hopped off of the bicycle and passed it to Amy, his legs feeling slightly weak.

“Ok, who’s ready?”  He asked as Zach came back with the other bike.  Kyle hopped up and down, and Brian stared skeptically at the bike as Zach handed it to him.  “First things first, lets get on the thing,” Instructed Peter.  Both of his charges did so, and Peter spent a minute adjusting the height of Kyle’s seat.  “Ah, much better.  Brian, I think you should be able to figure this out, let me know if you need help.  That’s the brake there on the handle.”  Peter turned his attention back to the boy in front of him.  

“Sure, thanks,”  Brian said, as he started to pedal, the bike wobbling underneath him.  

“Ok Kyle, can you get one foot on the pedals?  Use the other foot to help you balance, good.  Now push with that foot and bring the other one off the ground…”  Kyle started to move, making it a few feet before the bike began to topple.  Peter caught both bike and rider, against his hip, propping them up.  “Good.”

Julie watched from afar as Kyle, cautiously at first, got the hang of the bike.  It was not long before he was zipping up and down the driveway, challenging the others to race him.  Zach took him up on the offer, letting the boy win.

“They’re great guys, aren’t they?”  Amy said, joining Julie on the porch.

“Yeah,” she smiled.  “I think so.”

“Sarah found a couple of boxes of bread mix in the pantry she’s going to try and make them in the fire.  
I’m going to help, and I’m sure she would appreciate some more company.”

“Sure.”  Julie said, laughing as Brian fell off of the bike near the roadway.  

They heard his ‘Ow’ all the way on the porch.

“Well, let me go check on my patient first.”  Amy said, smirking.

“I’ll go help Sarah.”

Despite a bruised ego, Brian was fine, a small scratch on his left knee that did not even break the skin.  To his credit, Brian climbed back on the bike and he too soon had figured the thing out.  

Kyle was again playing with the toy plane as Peter and Zach emptied one of the shopping carts, placing it’s contents in the infant carrier.

“You know, we should be able to get an extra mile or two a day now.” Zach said. 

“Let’s not get ahed of ourselves yet.”  Peter smiled.  The chore finished, they looked over the rest of the carts, redistributing the weight.

“There were some more canned goods inside we should take.” 

“Ok, lets get them.  As much as I like this place, I want to be moving as early as possible tomorrow.”

“Yeah, I understand.”  Peter said.  “I’ll be in in a minute.”

Alone in the garage, Peter approached a long workbench set against the back wall.  Hammers, wrenches and screwdrivers all neatly arranged, how did it go, a place for everything and everything in it’s place, thats right.  He pulled open the drawers, one by one, and found them each just as neatly arranged, screws in one compartment, nuts and bolts in their own, different sized nails.  It was not until he opened the last drawer, he could imagine the owner rarely going in it, that he found anything of real interest.  The drawer felt heavy as he pulled on it, the rails sticking from disuse.  Finally it budged with a jerk, the contents scraping around inside.  A pistol sat inside.  He pulled the gun out, hefting it’s weight in his hand and felt his fingers brush against something rough.  He turned the gun over, revealing a scratched silver patch against the near black of the rest of the weapon, where the serial number had once been.  Peter added the weapon to his collection and searched for a few more minutes on the desk.  He found an open box of razorblades which he took, but otherwise came up empty.  

He was greeted by the scent of warm bread as walked into the main house.  “That smells delicious,” He called out.

“Don’t you dare touch it Peter,” Amy shouted, “It’s for dinner.”

“What else are we having?”

“Well, you have a choice.  There was a jar of peanut butter hidden in a corner that looks like it is still good, or they had some freeze dried vegetables and Brian caught us a rabbit earlier.  There’s a stew cooking.”

Peter felt his stomach growl, “Can’t I have both?”  He laughed.

“Sure, if you go without tomorrow.”  She chided.  

“Stew then.”

She kissed his cheek as he walked through, and brushed up against the new pistol in his waistband.  

“What’s that?”

“Just a gun I found in the garage.  No bullets though.”

“Oh well.  Go get cleaned up, there is a trough of water out back.  We’ll be eating again soon.”
As Peter went to find the trough, Zach walked passed carrying an armload of canned goods.  “First trip.”  He winked at Peter.  

“Do you need some help?”  Peter asked

“Sure, there are some boxes of stuff in there, bread crumbs, flour, that type stuff.  Take it and we can sort it out later.”

“Good idea.”  Peter did so and soon him and Zach were rinsing there hands off in the trough and using a plastic cup to pour water over their heads.

“So?”  Zach asked.

“So, what?”

“Come on, don’t shut me out, how is it?”

“How is what?  Oh.”  Peter laughed.  “How old are you?  Quit acting like a damned teenager.  It’s nice though.”

“Nice?”

Amy appeared at the door, “Hey, we’re dishing up the soup, come on in.”

Zach let it dropped, but wore a smile the entire meal.

“You know, that is probably the best meal we’ve had since Christmas.”  Sarah said, sopping up the last of the stew in her bowl with a hunk of bread.

“Yeah it was, thanks for cooking it,”  Julie said.

“If there is nothing else, to do, I’m sore and going to turn in,” Peter said, massaging his calf muscles.

“Nah, mind if we stay up a little longer?”  Brian asked, pulling out his guitar.

“I want to leave as soon as possible.”  He looked directly at Amy, “Don’t stay out here too long.”

This earned him a cat call from Zach, but he ignored it and soon was lulled to sleep by the laughing and singing going on beyond the door.

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Monday, October 14, 2013

Hollow World Book 3 Chapter 22


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Peter rolled over, pulling the covers with him, and yawned.

“Hey,” Amy said, kissing his neck and taking some of the blankets back.  

“Sorry,” Peter said, rolling onto his back and staring at the ceiling.

Amy shifted, moving placing her head upon his bare chest.  “Thanks.”

“For what?”

“Getting us this far.”

“We’ve all contributed to that.”

“I know, but you’ve really helped keep us moving.  Do you really think we’ll get to Boulder City?”

“After we’ve come this far?  Yeah.”

The bedroom door opened and Zach poked his head in.  “Hey sleepyheads.  I thought I heard you.  Coffee’s almost done.”  And he was gone again.

“Are there any more beautiful words in the English language?”  Peter asked, smiling.

“I love you,”  Amy said.

Peter kissed the top of her head.  “Yeah, you’re right.  Those words are better.  Love you too.”  Peter said and he realized he did.  After all that he had been through, being shot at, chased by a madman across the state of Texas, only to have that same man seemingly put him under his protection.  After surviving a winter with the parents of a man he had only known a few months.  “Love you too,” he said again, and smiled.

“You’re right though.  Coffee sounds damned good, and I can’t tell what else it is I smell, but it smells good.”  They both got dressed and made a grand entrance into the kitchen together, the last of the group to join.

“First off,”  Zack said, “There’s a wood burning stove.”

“Nice,” Said Amy, “Did you say something about coffee?”

“Yes I did.  Here,”  He handed her and Peter each a mug of steaming liquid.  “I don’t know who went through the pantry, but they left us all kinds of goodies.  Pancake?”  He asked, lifting a plate piled high with fluffy pancakes from behind the bar.

“Oh, is there syrup?”

“Now someone’s getting greedy,”  Zach laughed, and produced a bottle of artificial maple syrup.  “They didn’t have the real stuff, but I’m sure this will do.”  He threw the bottle and Peter caught it.  
“Just don’t use it all.”

“There’s more,”  Julie said, a smile upon her face as well.

“Lets all sit down and eat.  Sarah and I slaved, ok Sarah slaved on those pancakes, and it would be a shame for them to go to waste.”  Zach said, setting the plate of pancakes down in the center of the large dining room table.

Peter chewed silently as he watched his friends, eat, laugh, and talk excitedly for the first time since they had departed Jud and Aubrey.  “I know this is supposed to be done with alcohol, but this is too good of an opportunity for me to let it pass.”

“You’re not going to get all sappy on us now, are you?”  Brian laughed from the other end of the table.

Amy squeezed his leg underneath the table as he continued.  “Yeah, I think I am.  I just wanted to propose a toast to all of you.  To family.”  He raised his cup, and the words were echoed around the table followed by the clink of coffee mugs.

His moment over, he watched as they returned to their excited chatter.  Finally, as Kyle finished the last pancake, Zach pushed himself away from the table.  “Peter, I think since she found it, Julie should be the one to show you.”

“What?”

“You’ll see,”  Julie said, rising from the table. 

As they walked out of the dining room, Kyle ran passed.  “Look what I found, he called out over his shoulder, returning a second later with an airplane made out of Lego.

“Cool,  I bet they’ll have lots of toys in Boulder City,” Peter said, winking at Julie.  “So, what is it you found?”

“Patience, come on.”  She led him out to the garage they had shoved their stuff in.  “I don’t know how we missed it last night, but when I came out here this morning to look for some cereal, this was before we found the pancake mix mind you, I saw these.”  She pulled up the garage door, letting the early morning sunlight in.

“This day is getting better and better, but there are only three.”  Peter said, looking at the three bikes leaning against the wall. 

“And a hand pump, and an infant carrier.”  Julie smiled.

“Do you know something I don’t know?”

“No!  Oh, no.  I thought we can use the carrier to replace one of the shopping carts.”

“Perfect.”  He walked over and began to look over the bikes.  “This one should fit Kyle perfectly,” He said, pulling out a small grey and black bike.

“Yeah, about that, he’s never rode a bike before.”

“Hell, I am not sure I can tell you when the last time I rode one was.  I think we can alternate whoever is on the bigger bikes, at least until we find some more.”

“I was thinking that too.”

All smiles, the two regained the rest of the group, who were still sitting around the table sipping hot coffee, with the exception of Kyle, who was still playing with the toy plane he had built.

“Kyle, come here.”  Peter shouted across the house, and once the boy had joined them he continued, “Ok, for those of you that don’t know, our luck has improved greatly.  There are three bikes out there, including one for Kyle,”  Kyle clapped at this “But…” Peter said, “Kyle does not know how to ride it.”  When he saw the boy’s expression, Peter hastily added, “And I’m a bit rusty myself.”

“So let’s stay an extra day here where it’s comfortable,”  Zach said.

“I was getting there.  That seems like the ideal thing to do, take a day, all of us try the bikes, we can teach Kyle how to ride, and start out fresh again tomorrow morning.  Does anyone object?”

“Sounds good,”  Brian said.  “Though, I’ve never rode a bike either.”

“Well, we don’t have any training wheels…”  Peter laughed and took a sip of his coffee.

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