tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7564505438332425192.post1547990838518014345..comments2023-04-27T08:16:15.885-07:00Comments on Wasted Productions: Hollow World Chapter 4Jonathan Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14841202262555830312noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7564505438332425192.post-90621337241469071222010-11-08T16:50:29.459-08:002010-11-08T16:50:29.459-08:00I think you've overdone the whole 'with an...I think you've overdone the whole 'with an H' trick. Other than that, this is pretty good, solid work. It just needs polish and some spell-checking.Fabio Bittarhttp://none.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7564505438332425192.post-17535272851631836792010-08-11T15:26:32.035-07:002010-08-11T15:26:32.035-07:00This is a pretty rough place your protagonists are...This is a pretty rough place your protagonists are in. I wonder why there's so much shooting, and whether there are other groups like the one here, just trying to make it through this whole event. Good work, looking forward to the next chapter.alphabetehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17305229870777987796noreply@blogger.com